tootled BBC Views Online last week, except of course the headline is not quite right. Not all of the hostages were freed, unless you count the two poor souls who were murdered and dumped in ditches as having been ‘freed’ too. Those who clicked on the errant headline did find out, in paragraphs four and five, that:
The Taleban seized the group of 23 last month as they travelled by bus on the main highway from Kandahar to Kabul.
Two male hostages were subsequently killed.
Nice passive BBC reporting on the nice passive Taleban, as if the South Koreans were ‘killed in a road accident’ or somesuch, quite coincidental to their kidnap, rather than brutally and viciously murdered and dumped by their brutal and vicious kidnappers acting in the name of their supposed god.
Later, around 10pm on Saturday, BBC Views Online reported that:
Freed South Koreans return home
But by 6.30am on Sunday, a mere nine edits later, the story was spun into:
Freed S Korean hostages ‘sorry’
…though even after all these ‘revisions’, the article still refers to:
…two colleagues executed by the Taleban.
…which is, as we have noted before (yes you, Robin Denselow, BBC Newsnight), contrary to the BBC’s own BBC News Styleguide (PDF), where page 69, Troublesome words, states:
Execute means to put to death after a legal process.
Terrorists or criminals do not execute people, they
murder them.
You can follow the whole sorry BBC Views Online edit saga, starting with version 1, revision 1 courtesy of the excellent News Sniffer Revisionista service.
Still in Afghanistan, Biased BBC reader Pounce notes another poor BBC Views Online headline, Afghan attack ‘kills civilians’, which is at best ambiguous, at worst downright misleading, since the story itself is:
An attack aimed at a US-led coalition base in Afghanistan has killed at least 10 people…
…in which case the headline could have been Taleban attack ‘kills civilians’. Strange that the supposedly professional journalists at BBC Views Online didn’t think of this obvious improvement to accuracy and clarity.
Thank you to Biased BBC readers Pounce and champagne bottles for their links.